Tuesday, 10 November 2020

I made this by myself and it was very hard I thinck the easyist part was the scy..I relly ingoyd it if I do it agen I wood proply mack a how to tran your dragone. But whow knows I cood mack it about anything.Ples leve a comment.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Luke
    Wow! Your Google drawing is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G! I am very impressed. Your narrative is great too. I can see that you really like Harry Potter. You have also written a great description of your learning, but it would have helped with your overall post if you had got someone to proof read your description before you posted it, as there are a few errors in it. If you want to, we can edit your post and fix those errors up, this would improve the overall quality of your post. But still, this is an awesome example of your work. Well done Luke!

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  2. hi luke
    wow i like you google drawings they are F.A.N.T.A.S.T.I.C i love what you are doing with you google drawings

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  3. kia ora I'am Rylee from St Marys School. I really like your drawing I think its really creative. Maybe next time you could change the apples to circles.
    From Rylee

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